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- German Literature
- The Problem of Language in "All Quiet on the Western Front"
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- For it is no easy undertaking, I say,
- to describe the bottom of the Universe;
- nor is it for tongues that only babble child's play.
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- (The Inferno, XXXII, 7-9.)
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- Erich Maria Remarque's All Quiet on the Western Front, a novel
- set in World War I, centers around the changes wrought by the war on one
- young German soldier. During his time in the war, Remarque's protagonist,
- Paul Baumer, changes from a rather innocent Romantic to a hardened and
- somewhat caustic veteran. More importantly, during the course of this
- metamorphosis, Baumer disaffiliates himself from those societal
- icons--parents, elders, school, religion--that had been the foundation of
- his pre-enlistment days. This rejection comes about as a result of
- Baumer's realization that the pre-enlistment society simply does not
- understand the reality of the Great War. His new society, then, becomes
- the Company, his fellow trench soldiers, because that is a group which does
- understand the truth as Baumer has experienced it.
- Remarque demonstrates Baumer's disaffiliation from the
- traditional by emphasizing the language of Baumer's pre- and
- post-enlistment societies. Baumer either can not, or chooses not to,
- communicate truthfully with those representatives of his pre-enlistment and
- innocent days. Further, he is repulsed by the banal and meaningless
- language that is used by members of that society. As he becomes alienated
- from his former, traditional, society, Baumer simultaneously is able to
- communicate effectively only with his military comrades. Since the novel
- is told from the first person point of view, the reader can see how the
- words Baumer speaks are at variance with his true feelings. In his preface
- to the novel, Remarque maintains that "a generation of men ... were
- destroyed by the war" (Remarque, All Quiet Preface). Indeed, in All Quiet
- on the Western Front, the meaning of language itself is, to a great extent,
- destroyed.
- Early in the novel, Baumer notes how his elders had been facile
- with words prior to his enlistment. Specifically, teachers and parents had
- used words, passionately at times, to persuade him and other young men to
- enlist in the war effort. After relating the tale of a teacher who
- exhorted his students to enlist, Baumer states that "teachers always carry
- their feelings ready in their waistcoat pockets, and trot them out by the
- hour" (Remarque, All Quiet I. 15). Baumer admits that he, and others, were
- fooled by this rhetorical trickery. Parents, too, were not averse to using
- words to shame their sons into enlisting. "At that time even one's parents
- were ready with the word 'coward'" (Remarque, All Quiet I. 15).
- Remembering those days, Baumer asserts that, as a result of his war
- experiences, he has learned how shallow the use of these words was.
- Indeed, early in his enlistment, Baumer comprehends that although authority
- figures
- taught that duty to one's country is the greatest
- thing, we already knew that death-throes are stronger.
- But for all that, we were no mutineers, no deserters,
- no cowards--they were very free with these expressions.
- We loved our country as much as they; we went
- courageously into every action; but also we
- distinguished the false from true, we had suddenly
- learned to see.
- (Remarque, All Quiet I. 17)
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- What Baumer and his comrades have learned is that the words and expressions
- used by the pillars of society do not reflect the reality of war and of
- one's participation in it. As the novel progresses, Baumer himself uses
- words in a similarly false fashion.
- A number of instances of Baumer's own misuse of language occur
- during an important episode in the novel--a period of leave when he visits
- his home town. This leave is disastrous for Baumer because he realizes
- that he can not communicate with the people on the home front because of
- his military experiences and their limited, or nonexistent, understanding
- of the war.
- When he first enters his house, for example, Baumer is
- overwhelmed at being home. His joy and relief are such that he cannot
- speak; he can only weep (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 140). When he and his
- mother greet each other, he realizes immediately that he has nothing to say
- to her: "We say very little and I am thankful that she asks nothing"
- (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 141). But finally she does speak to him and
- asks, "'Was it very bad out there, Paul?'" (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 143).
- Here, when he answers, he lies, ostensibly to protect her from hearing of
- the chaotic conditions from which he has just returned. He thinks to
- himself,
- Mother, what should I answer to that! You would
- not understand, you could never realize it. And you
- never shall realize it. Was it bad, you ask.--You,
- Mother,--I shake my head and say: "No, Mother, not
- so very. There are always a lot of us together so it
- isn't so bad."
- (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 143)
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- Even in trying to protect her, by using words that are false, Baumer
- creates a separation between his mother and himself. Clearly, as Baumer
- sees it, such knowledge is not for the uninitiated. On another level,
- however, Baumer cannot respond to his mother's question: he understands
- that the experiences he has had are so overwhelming that a "civilian"
- language, or any language at all, would be ineffective in describing them.
- Trying to replicate the experience and horrors of the war via words is
- impossible, Baumer realizes, and so he lies. Any attempt at telling the
- truth would, in fact, trivialize its reality.
- During the course of his leave, Baumer also sees his father.
- The fact that he does not wish to speak with his parent (i.e., use few or
- no words at all) shows Baumer's movement away from the traditional
- institution of the family. Baumer reports that his father "is curious
- [about the war] in a way that I find stupid and distressing; I no longer
- have any real contact with him" (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 146). In
- considering the demands of his father to discuss the war, Baumer, once
- again, realizes the impossibility, and, in this case, even the danger, of
- trying to relate the reality of the war via language.
- There is nothing he likes more than just hearing
- about it. I realize he does not know that a man
- cannot talk of such things; I would do it willingly,
- but it is too dangerous for me to put these things
- into words. I am afraid they might then become
- gigantic and I be no longer able to master them.
- (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 146)
-
- Again, Baumer notes the impossibility of making the experience of war
- meaningful within a verbal context: the war is too big, the words
- describing it would have to be correspondingly immense and, with their
- symbolic size, might become uncontrollable and, hence, meaningless.
- While with his father, Baumer meets other men who are certain
- that they know how to fight and win the war. Ultimately, Baumer says of
- his father and of these men that "they talk too much for me ... They
- understand of course, they agree, they may even feel it so too, but only
- with words, only with words" (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 149). Baumer is
- driven away from the older men because he understands that the words of his
- father's generation are meaningless in that they do not reflect the
- realities of the world and of the war as Baumer has come to understand
- them.
- Also during his leave, Baumer visits the mother of a fallen
- comrade, Kemmerich. As he did with his own mother, he lies, this time in
- an attempt to shield her from the details of her son's lingering death.
- Moreover, in this conversation, we see Baumer rejecting yet another one of
- the traditional society's foundations: religious orthodoxy. He assures
- Kemmerich's mother that her son "'died immediately. He felt absolutely
- nothing at all. His face was quite calm'" (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 160).
- Frau Kemmerich doesn't believe him, or, at least, chooses not to. She asks
- him to swear "by everything that is sacred to" him (that is, to God, as far
- as she is concerned) that what he says is true (Remarque, All Quiet VII.
- 160). He does so easily because he realizes that nothing is sacred to him.
- By perverting this oath, Baumer shows both his unwillingness to
- communicate honestly with a member of the home front and his rejection of
- the God of that society. Thus, another break with an aspect of his
- pre-enlistment society is effected through Baumer's conscious misuse of
- language.
- During his leave, perhaps Baumer's most striking realization of
- the vacuity of words in his former society occurs when he is alone in his
- old room in his parents' house. After being unsuccessful in feeling a part
- of his old society by speaking with his mother and his father and his
- father's friends, Baumer attempts to reaffiliate with his past by once
- again becoming a resident of the place. Here, among his mementos, the
- pictures and postcards on the wall, the familiar and comfortable brown
- leather sofa, Baumer waits for something that will allow him to feel a part
- of his pre-enlistment world. It is his old schoolbooks that symbolize that
- older, more contemplative, less military world and which Baumer hopes will
- bring him back to his younger innocent ways.
- I want that quiet rapture again. I want to feel
- the same powerful, nameless urge that I used to feel
- when I turned to my books. The breath of desire that
- then arose from the coloured backs of the books,
- shall fill me again, melt the heavy, dead lump of
- lead that lies somewhere in me and waken again the
- impatience of the future, the quick joy in the
- world of thought, it shall bring back again the
- lost eagerness of my youth. I sit and wait.
- (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 151)
-
- But Baumer continues to wait and the sign does not come; the
- quiet rapture does not occur. The room itself, and the pre-enlistment
- world it represents, become alien to him. "A sudden feeling of foreignness
- suddenly rises in me. I cannot find my way back" (Remarque, All Quiet VII.
- 152). Baumer understands that he is irredeemably lost to the primitive,
- military, non-academic world of the war. Ultimately, the books are
- worthless because the words in them are meaningless. "Words, Words,
- Words--they do not reach me. Slowly I place the books back in the shelves.
- Nevermore" (Remarque, All Quiet VII. 153). In his experiences with
- traditional society, Baumer perverts language, that which separates the
- human from the beast, to the point where it has no meaning. Baumer shows
- his rejection of that traditional society by refusing to, or being unable
- to, use the standards of its language.
- Contrasted with Baumer's experiences during his visit home are
- his dealings with his fellow trench soldiers. Unlike Baumer's feelings at
- home where he chooses not to speak with his father and makes an empty vow
- to Frau Kemmerich, Baumer is able to effect true communication, of both a
- verbal and spiritual kind, with his fellow trench soldiers. Indeed, within
- this group, words can have a meaningful, soothing, even rejuvenating,
- effect.
- Not long after his return from leave, Baumer and some of his
- comrades go out on patrol to ascertain the enemy's strength. During this
- patrol, Baumer is pinned down in a shell hole, becomes disoriented, and
- suffers a panic attack. He states: "Tormented, terrified, in my
- imagination, I see the grey, implacable muzzle of a rifle which moves
- noiselessly before me whichever way I try to turn my head" (Remarque, All
- Quiet IX. 184-85). He is unable to regain his equanimity until he hears
- voices behind him. He recognizes the voices and realizes that he is close
- to his comrades in his own trench. The effect of his fellow soldiers'
- words on Baumer is antithetical to the effect his father's and his father's
- friends' empty words have on him.
- At once a new warmth flows through me. These
- voices, these quiet words ... behind me recall
- me at a bound from the terrible loneliness and
- fear of death by which I had been almost destroyed.
- They are more to me than life these voices, they
- are more than motherliness and more than fear; they
- are the strongest, most comforting thing there
- is anywhere: they are the voices of my comrades.
- I am no longer ... alone in the darkness;--
- I belong to them and they to me; we all share the
- same fear and the same life, we are nearer than
- lovers, in a simpler, a harder way; I could bury
- my face in them, in these voices, these words that
- have saved me and will stand by me.
- (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 186)
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- Here, Baumer understands the reviving effects of his comrades' words.
- Strikingly, as opposed to his town's citizens' empty words, the words of
- Baumer's comrades actually go beyond their literal meanings. That is,
- whereas Baumer notices that the words of the traditional world have no
- meaning, the words of his comrades have more meaning than even they are
- aware of.
- In fact, true communication can exist in the world of the war
- with few or no words said at all. This phenomenon is perhaps best
- demonstrated in the novel during a scene involving Baumer and his Second
- Company mate, Stanislaus Katczinsky. This scene, with its Eucharistic
- overtones, can be counterpoised to Baumer's meeting with Kemmerich's
- mother. During that meeting, Frau Kemmerich insisted on some kind of
- verbal attestation of Baumer's spiritual disposition. As noted above, he
- is quite willing to give her such an asseveration because the words he uses
- in doing so mean nothing to him. With Katczinsky, though, the situation is
- different because the spirituality of the event is such that words are not
- necessary, in fact, would be hindrances to the communion Baumer and
- Katczinsky attain.
- The scene is a simple one. After Baumer and Katczinsky have
- stolen a goose, in a small deserted lean-to they eat it together.
- We sit opposite one another, Kat and I,
- two soldiers in shabby coats, cooking a goose in
- the middle of the night. We don't talk much, but
- I believe we have a more complete communion with
- one another than even lovers have ... The grease
- drips from our hands, in our hearts we are close
- to one another ... we sit with a goose between us
- and feel in unison, are so intimate that we do
- not even speak.
- (Remarque, All Quiet V. 87)
-
- These elemental and primitive activities of getting and then eating food
- bring about a communion, a feeling "in unison," between the two men that
- clearly cannot be found in the
- word-heavy environment of Baumer's home town. Perhaps Remarque wants to
- make the point that true communication can occur only in action, or in
- silence, or almost accidentally. At any rate, Baumer demonstrates toward
- the end of his life that even he is not immune from verbal duplicity of a
- kind that was used on him to get him to enlist.
- Soon after he hears the comforting words of his comrades (see
- above), Baumer is caught in another shell hole during the bombardment.
- Here, he is forced to kill a Frenchman who jumps into it while attacking
- the German lines. Baumer is horrified at his action. He notes, "This is
- the first time I have killed with my hands, whom I can see close at hand,
- whose death is my doing" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 193). That is, the war,
- and his part in it, have become much more personalized because now he can
- actually see the face of his enemy. In his grief, Baumer takes the dead
- man's pocket-book from him so that he can find out the deceased's name and
- family situation. Realizing that the man he killed is no monster, that, in
- fact, he had a family, and is evidently very much like himself, Baumer
- begins to make promises to the corpse. He indicates that he will write to
- his family and goes so far as to promise the corpse that he, Baumer, will
- take his place on earth: "'I have killed the printer, Gerard Duval. I
- must be a printer'" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 197). More importantly,
- Baumer renounces his status as soldier by apologizing to the corpse for
- killing him.
- "Comrade, I did not want to kill you ... You were
- only an idea to me before, an abstraction that lived
- in my mind and called forth its appropriate response.
- It was that abstraction I stabbed ... Forgive me,
- comrade. We always see it too late. Why do they
- never tell us that you are poor devils like us, that
- your mothers are just as anxious as ours, and that we
- have the same fear of death, and the same dying and
- the same agony--Forgive me, comrade; how could you
- be my enemy? If we threw away these rifles and this
- uniform you could be my brother just like Kat ..."
- (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 195)
-
- In addition to the obvious brotherhood of nations sentiment that appears in
- Baumer's eulogy, it is interesting to note that Baumer sees that Duval
- could have been even closer--like Katczinsky, a member of Baumer's inner
- circle of Second Company.
- All of the sentiments, all of the words, that Baumer
- articulates to Duval are admirable, but they are absolutely false.
- As time passes, as he spends more time with the corpse of Duval
- in the shell-hole, Baumer realizes that he will not fulfill the various
- promises he has made. He cannot write to Duval's family; it would be
- beyond impropriety to do so. Moreover, Baumer renounces his brotherhood
- sentiments: "Today you, tomorrow me" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 197). Soon,
- Baumer admits, "I think no more of the dead man, he is of no consequence to
- me now" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 198). And later, to hedge his bets in
- case there happens to be justice in the universe, Baumer states, "Now
- merely to avert any ill-luck, I babble mechanically: 'I will fulfill
- everything, fulfill everything I have promised you--' but
- already I know that I shall not do so" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 198).
- Remarque's point in this episode is clear: no one is exempt
- from the perversion of language vis-a-vis the war. Even Paul Baumer, who
- had been disgusted by the meaninglessness of language as demonstrated in
- his home town, himself uses words and language that are meaningless. Once
- he is reunited with his comrades after the shell hole episode, Baumer
- admits "it was mere drivelling nonsense that I talked out there in the
- shell-hole" (Remarque, All Quiet IX. 199). Why does Baumer do it? Why
- does he employ the same types of vacuous words and sentiments that his
- elders and teachers had used and for which he has no respect? "It was only
- because I had to lie [One assumes that this double meaning is apparent only
- in English.] there with him so long ... After all, war is war" (Remarque,
- All Quiet IX. 200).
- Ultimately, that is all that Paul Baumer and the reader are
- left with: war is war. It cannot be defined; it cannot even be discussed
- with any accuracy. It has no sense and, in fact, is the embodiment of a
- lack of any kind of meaning. In All Quiet on the Western Front, Erich
- Maria Remarque shows the disorder created by the war. This disorder
- affects such elemental societal institutions as the family, the schools,
- and the church. Moreover, the war is so chaotic that it infects the basic
- abilities, not the least of which is verbal, of humanity itself. By
- showing how the First World War deleteriously affects the syntax of
- language, Remarque is able to demonstrate how the war irreparably alters
- the order of the world itself.
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- WORK CITED
-
- Remarque, Erich Maria. All Quiet on the Western Front.
- New York: Ballantine Books, 1984.
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